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II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报我写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：

1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；

2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

老师的答案：

Dear Sir/Madam,

As an avid reader of your newspaper, I'd like to offer some suggestions for changes that hopefully could be made to your future editions. A section that I think you can do without would be Culture and, in the meantime, a section that I suggest adding to the newspaper is Career Planning. My reasons are as follows.

Since this newspaper is intended for students, a relaxed tone and light-hearted topics would get in good graces with us. Culture seems a rather serious section, which isn't really necessary considering our school curriculum has done an excellent job imparting to us gems of various cultures in the world. Besides, culture and entertainment are inextricably linked—that is, we can subliminally learn about western culture through listening to English songs and watching American or British TV series. For example, Big Bang Theory has shown us how Americans now regard "smart is the new sexy," and Sherlock has shown us how the wry humor of Brits can actually strengthen the bond between two detectives.

The reason why I'd like to see a Career Planning section is that high schools in Shanghai seldom offer career guidance, something that should be made indispensable to the curriculums. Employers often complain about graduates' lack of skill and, more importantly, mental preparedness to do things professionally. I think that it's part of a school's responsibility to help students build links between academic subjects and employable skills. These are not mutually exclusive entities, but rather a mutually dependent whole. Book knowledge bolsters our qualifications and confidence necessary for a successful career, while proper career planning will be beneficial in directing our limited time and energy to what really matters to us personally. Better still, it would be fantastic to read about other people's reflections on job seeking and career development.

It is time we made the newspaper breezier to its readers and incorporated some practical tips on finding work and building a career.

Many thanks

Chen Fei

第3题的解题思路如下：

首先，根据标明的等高线数值可知，每根相邻等高线的差值为50米，由此可以推出每条等高线的数值，并得出剖面线AB与MN的交点海拔为200~250米之间。

然后，根据交点处的海拔范围，以及在AB剖面图中只有第 2 点是符合200~250米之间的条件，因此，AB剖面图中的交点应为第2点；

最后，根据MN穿过的等高线分布区域可知，这个交点处于两个山头之间的鞍部，因此在剖面图MN中，应该为第4点。

因此，第三题选D。

第4题思路：

首先根据题意，水库最高蓄水位为150米时，凡是海拔150以下的区域均被淹没。而图中海拔100米的两条等高线是相邻的，可推出图中地形是一条谷地，淹没的区域就是海拔150米以下的这片谷地。

然后再看等高线图的东北与西南等未被淹没区域，全都比这条河谷高，就算水位达到150米，那也只是形成类似与三峡夔门那种两岸高山的景观，绝不会是岛屿。

因此，第四题选D，无岛。